Boy, shirtless, bare feet accustomed to the earth, shaggy chocolate locks lightened by the sun
Favorite ragged cut-offs tentatively hang on narrow hips
The slap, slap, slap of his stride down a well packed earthen path
Something slows and stirs and calls him to leave that way
He lay in a field of deep spring grasses
The warm earth held him, he made a bed between the sharp stiff stems and the soft grasses beneath
The buzz of insects, the call of birds, cow mooing in the distance
Grass and flower and Oak and cattle hung warmly over that place, moved about by the wind
No one had suggested it, there was no Youtube then teaching Westerners to breathe
Perhaps it was the connection of his bare feet to the soil and Her children
Perhaps it was the warmth and the buzz and the fragrance and the light and the tastes on the wind that called to him
His senses connected with the earth created a space there under the wide sky
He breathed in and out without thinking, without knowing that he matched the rhythms of Her
He felt Her pushing back holding him aloft as he lay still as a heavy and ancient stone
His mind began to sleep as his awareness awakened
Gazing deeply into the worlds that exist only in the white shifting shapes above him
He thought things that could not fit or be contained in a word
He thought, he felt, he knew without effort, it just was
He felt connected to Her in a real and material way, the boy was still, yet aware that he moved
She moved, the Earth turned and he turned with Her
He lay there out of time, floating, spinning, senses outgrown by the depth of him
Then, another call like a voice through water claimed his attention
The spinning slowed, the heaviness of him lightened, he remembered the warmth and the buzz and the fragrance and the light
Soon the slap, slap, slap of his bare feet on the hard packed dirt, all he thought was “That was so cool.” . . . bare feet running
He grinned and continued on his way thinking to return there someday.
He just remembered, feet no longer running
Perhaps I should
Perhaps I should have long ago
hmmm 🙂
I am so jumping up and down and clapping my hands!
Well, hitting that like button is not enough. Your writing moves me in many ways. The form, you can keep it simple enough to go straight to my heart, without ever being ordinary. The substance, I have been you one day and I wish I could feel like that again. I loved it. Thank you say much. Cheers, HC
SO much… 😉
That makes me smile. Thank you so. I have to be simple. Lost my thesaurus. 🙂 no really its just me. I perfer words that don’t make you work to get to the meaning. I’m glad you were here
That makes me smile. Thank you so. I have to be simple cause I am and lost my thesaurus 🙂 I don’t like words that make one work too much to get to the meaning.
Rød-el is Alnus Glutinosa in latin.
A wonderful water loving high tree.
Also I wrote TID instead of TIME.
Tid is time in English.
Hello! Thank you for being here with me. 🙂
Dear man !
I just came back from … the same situation …
Just laying in the new grass in the wind, listening to the creek,
below the Rød-el (must find out in English).
In the close buzz of happy insects
with the clean blue high sky above.
Just what YOU described.
On our silently wandering Earth.
i felt like David – with his heart harp –
and the two rams,
who was again back in the meadows this first day.
I left looking at … just was.
Became one with our Earth.
For a timeless tid.
And walked back to work
… and here is you !
Too.
Hello! Thank you for being here with me.
That was so beautiful, so sensual (I agree Fimnora). Such wonderful writing!
It is amazing to me that “real” writers enjoy what I do. Not being whiny just never thought of myself that way. Thank you and all of yall for the gracious attention. Makes the boy in me grin.
damn good
Hey friend! Thank you.
Ah! To become ONE with the Earth. So sensual! to realize you’re just as connected as all the birds and bees, and crickets who share the same space as you. I could see, and feel it. Even within the thriving life going on around, the sense of belonging.
See! I am NOT the only one who finds all the senses marvelously displayed in your work. You’re like a master storyteller…
Hey my buddy. Thank you for your feedback. Makes me want to do it some more.
Loved it. I felt like it was me . . . that’s how into your writing I was. Transported.
Thank you so much. It makes me glad that you enjoyed it. I am happy that to came by to play!
Your words are captivating. You capture your memories in such a vivid manner. You write from such innocent and full of life experiences. I have to admit that I envy your blessed childhood. I do find solace in my writing touching others, and enjoying your writing. Thank you for sharing.
You writing is beautiful and heartfelt!
I agree with Calensariel. You really excel at this writing – transporting your reader to a place and time beyond our immediate reach, yet so real.
There is still alot of little boy in me. Thank you for being here.
It is beautiful!
I love it. It gives me the same quilty feel as the last two. You excel at this writing. I could feel your connection with the earth in this one. But it’s not just that these poems make me feel a certain way. I see pictures when I close my eyes and listen to you read them. In fact, I’ll send you to show you what I mean…
I remember when I did the thing wrote about. I thought I could feel the earth turning
You can feel the same thing on a football field when there’s not a bunch of people on it.